Great opening chapter! The description of Clark’s first day in Metropolis was so refreshingly different from canon, but not completely off the mark.

Neat way for him to meet Jimmy! His interview with Perry is different as well. I like the fact that he does not meet Lois at that time, it allows Perry to get to know this earnest young man without interruption.

On to the next part.

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.