Hi Vicki!

Love the additions you made to this chapter. You can really feel like you're in Clark's head experiencing Metropolis for the first time as he steps off the bus and takes the city in. **zips muzzle back up**

"I know nothing I swear!" huh **whistles innocently**

~ Folc4evernaday

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