clap I love it! I never got too into Person of Interest, but I know enough to get around. wink I feel like if they really were responsible for protecting Lois though, they'd never be able to leave. lol Love the connection they made to CK=S, and that they kept their own methods secret.

Can't believe this is your first challenge response! thud Very well done! Now you can't stop writing them... in fact your fic has inspired a little idea in my head that I'm gonna put up on the challenge board... (it's cyclical you see?) laugh

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