Originally Posted by folc4evernaday
I love the changes you made to the scene at the end. Flows so much better. Perry's comments at the end really tied it all together nicely. hyper clap notworthy

Great job!

Thanks! Yeah, I had to agree with your suggestions and cut it down a bit. It really wasn't needed and it flows better now. At least Lane and Kent are a permanent team now. smile

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