I love the changes you made to the scene at the end. Flows so much better. Perry's comments at the end really tied it all together nicely.

Great job!

Love how you changed the scenes up. I still want to try that authentic Chinese food. Does he deliver? I can't wait to see what else you change.

Finally got caught up.

Now that Clark has introduced Lois to his favorite Chinese place he's going to have to fly back to China whenever she wants Chinese food.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

They'd broken the true story of what had happened at the Majestic Theater. Gary Wilder had been arrested and was awaiting trial for conspiring to kill his step-daughter, Tiffany Bronson. He'd hired Vincent Jonas to ensure that the building came down while Tiffany was inside, if, indeed, she decided to pay her last respects to the aging theater. When the job had been botched and Tiffany had miraculously survived the attempt on her life, Gary had stormed his way over to Vincent's apartment. After a brief, but loud, struggle, Gary had overpowered the wiry young man and killed him in his rage.

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You were right, there was a lot more to Tiffany than meets the eye! It is a pity Gary gambled away her college funds. Maybe Clark could ask Bruce to arrange for a scholarship?