Catching up on my reading...
What delightful twists and turns you made to this story!
I'm so glad you fixed Lois's reaction from The Phoenix. The only thing I can think of is that she was in shock in the show, but I love your version.
I actually half-expected her to punch him like she did Max Deter.
And you have a great lead to your next part in the final chapter. Looking forward to it!!
