Mouserocks

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Ugh, I need more!! Love the introduction of Henry and Clark, and can't wait until Clark learns about Henry's secrets as well. I'm glad you have Henry just come out and say it too, not beat around the bush.

Young Lois is exciting! I could also see a spin off in the future of this story... Lois young and adapting to life in the 2050's or whatever... Maybe the secret comes out... maybe not. The whole rejuvenation process seems very interesting, especially the "normalizing" of it in the world. What sort of implications does this have globally? I can totally see Lois kicking butt on a story like this. Something a la "I spent the Night with Superman" or more like "I spent a year rejuvenated" or idk. huh

Sad to hear about Clark's death and brief time as a hostage. Poor Clark didn't need that childhood fear of his confirmed. I still feel like I want a little more information about that, but it adds nice color to their backstory. Can't wait for more, curious to see where you're taking this, but at the same time, I can't help but feel the last part is coming way too soon. frown

Yes! Another comment! dance

Henry was always blunt on the show. That was one of his greatest strengths but also a weakness. In Part Three we shall see how it is the latter.

If you think young Lois is exciting, wait until you see what she does to ... never mind, don't want to give anything away.

In another part we will see some of the implications of the Renewal Process. Several have PMed me about what life will be like for those who are able to afford the process and what the social impact will have of the planet as a whole. We shall see.

Clark wasn't a hostage. But Ignatius did take unfair advantage of the situation. For that he will get his comeuppance! wildguy


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.