Yes, Clark is not that frustrating, but Luther sure is! Hmmm, maybe I should take that back, Clark is careful with phones at the Daily Planet, but he meets Bill Henderson at the precinct? He should know Luther has eyes and ears there! He even mentions that Henderson is the only policeman he trusts. Why risk more reprisals from Luthor's 'shadows'?

But more importantly the opening paragraphs where we see Martha and Jonathan holded up in some motel. How painful for them to watch their son suffer! My heart went out to both of them.

Anyhow, this is one of the most powerful stories I have read in a long time. When Kerth time comes, you have my vote! dance

Please post the next part as soon as you can!!

Last edited by Morgana; 07/03/17 08:36 AM.

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.