Good beginning. I like the idea of a somewhat clairvoyant Lois -- it would certainly explain her leaps of logic that turn out correct.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.


"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.”

- Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland