Just realised I haven't replied to any of you!

Mouse- thank you! Do me a favour and forget about the original version of this though wink It's the one story I've posted that I honestly dislike. This one actually feels good.

Morgana- yup, sometimes she's just gotta take charge!

Folc- thank you so much for your help!

DC- I could just picture Lois getting frustrated with him enough to do this lol. Also, I envy your ability to weave such complex and interesting plots!

Jackie- thank you!

Thanks everyone. As I said in my author's note, I was truly unhappy with the original version of this fic. I love that you've all enjoyed the rewrite so much more

"It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg