If you are trying to achieve the title of Her Royal Evilness, Queen Krafty the First, you just succeeded.

I thought something was amiss when I saw the 29/29. I just didn’t realize how amiss things turned out to be. Reading this part was like watching a car accident, just staring in horrified fascination, unable to anything about it.

It was pretty good as far as Tank endings go, but if you don’t mind, I would like the rest of the story now.

-Em

P.S. It was a stroke of pure genius to have the last line include the phrase “away from the sun.”


"But my experience is that as soon as people are old enough to know better, they don't know anything at all."

-Oscar Wilde, "Lady Windermere's Fan"