Loved how in Chapter 4 you showed Lois's lingering fears and Kal-El's isolation and loneliness in addition to his nobility.

Glad to see the first rays of hope, with the scientists able to spend weeks or months with Kal-El to plan strategy to stop Nightfall, or divert it. I liked the interaction between Lex and Martha. Hope to see more of her and Jonathan in this universe, since in the last story Lois had indicated they hated the Kryptonians. Looks like Kal-El is making baby steps in progress of showing himself to not be a threat. clap


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"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor

"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly