FDK: Restitution ch 5 - 04/06/17 07:53 PM
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Re: FDK: Restitution ch 5 - 04/07/17 02:17 AM
Loved how in Chapter 4 you showed Lois's lingering fears and Kal-El's isolation and loneliness in addition to his nobility.
Glad to see the first rays of hope, with the scientists able to spend weeks or months with Kal-El to plan strategy to stop Nightfall, or divert it. I liked the interaction between Lex and Martha. Hope to see more of her and Jonathan in this universe, since in the last story Lois had indicated they hated the Kryptonians. Looks like Kal-El is making baby steps in progress of showing himself to not be a threat.
Glad to see the first rays of hope, with the scientists able to spend weeks or months with Kal-El to plan strategy to stop Nightfall, or divert it. I liked the interaction between Lex and Martha. Hope to see more of her and Jonathan in this universe, since in the last story Lois had indicated they hated the Kryptonians. Looks like Kal-El is making baby steps in progress of showing himself to not be a threat.
Re: FDK: Restitution ch 5 - 04/14/17 11:25 AM
An impressive work. I urge you to please keep going. It is Kerth season and there were a lot of stories to read before I could comment on this one!
Re: FDK: Restitution ch 5 - 04/25/17 01:12 PM
Thanks Morgana. Lack of feedback = lack of motivation, so I kind of let it drop from my mind.