“Yes, Duncan, as a matter of fact it was. Now we can proceed with the next part of my plan. I trust all is arranged and Mr. Preston Carpenter will meet me at his office tomorrow?”
I don't know why but everytime I see the name Duncan I think of that chimp in "Ducnan Checks in" movie. Made me laugh.
She took a sip of her wine, savoring the delicate notes of flavor as it swirled around her tongue. She took a shallow breath and said, “I…I wanted to say my marriage to Lex was a mistake.”
Poor Lex can't keep any woman happy
“Building Mr. Templar into my Trojan horse shall require time. Do you have the patience to wait?”
Templar? Is this who I think it is?
“Every time that man smiles at me I want to take a bath from the inside out! Press, he scares me.”
Haha. Nice idiom
Overall great part. You set the scene well and let us see the side of our antagonists well.
