The only problem I see with the story is that it ended. It seemed like at least a two parter maybe three from the plot threads you spun up in this part.

Anyway, a front runner for the 2017 Best Revelation at least because I loved the way you set that up and then cut it off with Trask!

Mike

Create all the happiness you are able to create.
Remove all the misery you are able to remove.

Jeremy Bentham