Ashamed to say I never commented on this story although, at the time of its posting I had fully intended on doing so.

There have been many fics which have Lois and Clark declaring undying love for each other only weeks after meeting. In some instances it makes sense, but give me a story that builds their relationship up slowly, say over 200 pages or more. Clark was the one more open to a relationship - until Lois flatly told him she didn't have time for one and before a certain superhero came along to slow everything down.

But here in a few paragraphs the evolution of their relationship comes together in a way we all can appreciate. Brava!

Better late than never!


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.