Hi Mike,

Thanks for the FDK!

Originally Posted by Mike M
Nice interaction between all of the young ones. I liked that you let Morgana figure out Kam-El/Jon. At least now he can go visit her and not have to explain to her how he got to upstate New York.

I am interested in how you handle the epilogue and what you include in it.

Looking forward to it.

Mike

This was the first part of a two part epilogue.

Morgana had a lot of information, she had seen Jon in exercise gear and Kam-El in his spandex uniform. The attitudes he displayed were very similar both between Jon and Kam-El. Jon will have to work on that. The item that cinched the ID was the kiss.

Hattie has almost as much information, but for some reason she keeps missing out on the personal interaction.

The rest of the epilogue will cover a lot of ground in a short time. Forewarned is forearmed.


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