Oh, what a lot of action in this chapter. With your wonderful descriptions of sights, sounds and smells.

I love how Lois takes charge of this investigation! hyper And having Ken Janney find the forensic computer evidence is wonderful. It's great how Lois does what she does best by investigating and getting the expert Ken to find the evidence. James Olson should be pleased that his team is so loyal and efficient, yet he also should be ashamed he didn't think of this first.

Ralph has made some powerful enemies in Lois and Clark (and Superman). And very smart of Clark to go to Lois and Superman, not Clark. He's protecting her! clap

Looking forward to the next chapter.


Cuidadora

"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor

"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly