Cuidadora

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Love this part! clap Great detail about even the air in the station. hail

And Lois is right there on top of the story.

Wheee! Part Eighteen was written two years ago, it seems adding those extra details to the train station really helped the story. Isn't that just like Lois to be in the thick of things even when she wasn't supposed to be there? smile1 So glad you enjoyed it!

Last edited by Morgana; 11/06/16 11:18 PM.
Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.