What a way to start the first chapter
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I absolutely love how you dove right into the situation. When I read that the story was going to be about 'IOM', I initially figured it would be about Lois and Clark dealing with Eugene, etc. This classic scene though? What a great idea to jump off from here
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So much could happen, so many different directions to take. My mind is going into overdrive thinking of where exactly you are going to take us.
I'm very excited for more. Great job!
Laura
