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Just a quick warning. This is a work in progress. I have a few chapters up my sleeve, but I may post irregularly until it's finished.

Edit: just figured out why I abandoned this. I got caught up writing A Week in Paris.

Eeek! What did Clark do? What did Lois do? Double-eek! Okay, you've got me hooked. Will Clark be able to figure out what to do with his parents in two different states? (His dad was visiting him in Metropolis, right?) Has Lois completely forgotten that she's hiding a fugitive in her apartment? (My guess is "YES".) Will Clark ever return to Metropolis and/or the Daily Planet? Or will he only return when enough time has passed that he'll have realized that Lois hasn't brought this story to Perry?

Will his dad remind him that Lois has no story without proof? Right now, she only has his word that he is and her word that she saw him levitate. (Which might get a story in the National Whisper, but not in the Daily Planet. Perry's a big fan of evidence, of which she has none.)

And, yep, Jonathon is totally going to kill him. If Martha doesn't beat him to it.

What a way to start the first chapter !

I absolutely love how you dove right into the situation. When I read that the story was going to be about 'IOM', I initially figured it would be about Lois and Clark dealing with Eugene, etc. This classic scene though? What a great idea to jump off from here ...

So much could happen, so many different directions to take. My mind is going into overdrive thinking of where exactly you are going to take us.

I'm very excited for more. Great job!
Laura

Taking a breather from assignments...

VirginiaR- that's a lot of questions lol. You're right, at this point in IOM, Jonathon is in Metropolis. Good point about her lack of evidence, too As for the rest, hopefully, I can tie up all the loose ends.

Laura- IOM has a lot going on, that's for sure. It's always struck me that when Lois asks Clark his biggest secret, Superman *has* to be the first thing that comes to mind. I can just see him thinking it, then going 'no, I can't tell her that'. Really, he's got two massive secrets- Superman, and the fact he's in love with Lois. Compared to those, Martha's possible affair is a very distant third.

Now I'm rambling.
My point was, I think the episode (and the series) would've been very different if Clark hadn't stopped to consider what to tell Lois.

Of course Jonathan is going to kill him! Why on Earth would he admit to Lois who he really is?