Hi Superjan!
Welcome to the boards and to comments! Always nice to have someone graduate from lurking to commenting. I did that, too. And as a writer, I can say that comments are always welcome.
I'm glad you like my story so far. It seemed reasonable for Clark to go talk to Martha and Jonathan about how to respond to Lois as Superman after she rejected him as Clark. It was after all their advice that he tell her how he felt. Going home would give him comfort and their more mature perspective. That led to Superman's polite if reserved manner with Lois. And since her heart isn't shattered, she has time to think more analytically than responding emotionally to the pain of losing Superman.
Thanks for commenting!
