Go Lois
! Go Lois
! Go Lois
! Go find CLARK! Woo-hoo!
I am loving this, Feli. This was a great chapter--you could really gather the reality that Lois was awakening to. Clark is her best friend ('is', not 'was'
), she loves him, she wants to be with him, and, currently, she has no business being engaged to Dan.
The date with Dan was written really well. The conversation was needed, along with the honesty. I really like how the situation was handled.
Can not wait for the next part...and--oh, look, it's posted
!
Laura
Good luck with all that moving! Hope everything is going smoothly for you guys.
