Ooh, more comments
Serves Clark right for not staying and fighting for what he wants
He does have a habit of running from difficult situations, whether they're putting his secret at risk or something closer to the heart. In a way, I guess they're just different sorts of danger- one risks his secret and the other risks his self. Hmm.
Well, that just makes me want to read it even more!
Which--not surprisingly--leads to me having absolutely no problem with a lacking A-Plot.
Thank you Susan and Laura, you just put my mind at ease... I was dubious about posting this story simply because it felt odd to me to have it go so long and have no A plot. I know other writers manage to pull it off, hopefully I do at least an okay job of it.
