Yay! So happy to see your name on the boards again. This is a great story and well worth the wait. Paul was so cruel to Lois, but in the end she got a much better man!

Clark's breakup with Lana made perfect sense. The entire scene was very well written, with great sensitivity.

Feel free to write another cool story any time! dance


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.