Oh, wow! Love this! I'm really impressed by how much hope you have broughten into this chapter--from 'where' we were just a chapter ago.

Martha is amazing. I really liked her conversation with Clark, how she brought a lot of reality to the forefront.

It's quite a change--from Clark wanting to leave, to now telling Lois the truth about himself. BUT...Clark's secret has been something that has come between them from the very beginning. He can't expect truth and honesty from Lois, when he's not (and has never) been completely himself around her.

Very much looking forward to some honest conversation. Very excited to read more!
Laura


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"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~