You certainly hit the tone of voice
Thanks. I did my best. I only realized just how short I fell on it, though, when Magical graciously translated the story for me into more accurate AAVE. If you're curious to see the results, you can find the translated version
on the archive. (I had already posted my version of the story here before Magical made the translation offer. I decided to keep my original one here, since others had already read and commented on it, and to submit the translated version to the archive.)
Joy,
Lynn
