groobie: Thanks. I'm glad you liked that joke at Superman's expense. Poor fellow, it seems he can't catch a break. wink

cuidadora: Always good to hear people enjoying my oddball humor. smile Thank you.

Christina: Yes, I finally posted it. blush Better late than never. It works better with that revamped (completely new and original) Part 3. Thanks for all your help on this!

That's 3 votes for keeping it in. Should I list it as part of the story or as an epilogue? (I don't usually break up my shorter stories into parts or chapters when I submit them to the Archives.)


VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.