Laura, thanks for the great feedback on parts 21-25! So glad to hear that you're enjoying the story so far. One of the fun things about writing for L&C is figuring out new ways to do the revelation scene! What will her reaction be; what will his reaction be to her reaction, and so on. :-) I'm pretty sure the options are endless!
I am SO curious how Cedric will react when he wakes up to Lavinia knowing everything.
Ah, yes! That's pretty cute, if I do say so myself. ;-) Nice waffy bit at the end of that section, too. I've got an outline for the parts leading up to it that need re-writing/editing and I'm hoping to get back to working on it on Sunday. [rubbing hands together in anticipation] I love, love, love this stuff! Keeps the little grey cells sparking and firing, don't you know! ;-)
Hope you have a lovely Thanksgiving, too, Laura ... and anyone else who reads this between now and then.
