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Posted By: ChrisM FDK: The Masked Avenger (25/46) - 11/23/15 01:58 AM
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Posted By: LMA Re: FDK: The Masked Avenger (25/46) - 11/24/15 05:38 PM
I'm really glad that Lavinia knows the truth. For Cedric's sake now, but also for their developing relationship. She's a very strong woman--she handled the news so well, knew what she had to do to help the person she loves, and she's doing it.

And also, what a scary place for Jacques to have been in! To know that Cedric needed help, but to not know fully what to do and how to be that help. Thank goodness Lavinia showed up when she did.

I am SO curious how Cedric will react when he wakes up to Lavinia knowing everything. Should be quite the read! Really enjoying this story clap.

Happy Thanksgiving, Chris smile
Laura
Posted By: ChrisM Re: FDK: The Masked Avenger (25/46) - 11/25/15 08:23 PM
Laura, thanks for the great feedback on parts 21-25! So glad to hear that you're enjoying the story so far. One of the fun things about writing for L&C is figuring out new ways to do the revelation scene! What will her reaction be; what will his reaction be to her reaction, and so on. :-) I'm pretty sure the options are endless!
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I am SO curious how Cedric will react when he wakes up to Lavinia knowing everything.
Ah, yes! That's pretty cute, if I do say so myself. ;-) Nice waffy bit at the end of that section, too. I've got an outline for the parts leading up to it that need re-writing/editing and I'm hoping to get back to working on it on Sunday. [rubbing hands together in anticipation] I love, love, love this stuff! Keeps the little grey cells sparking and firing, don't you know! ;-)

Hope you have a lovely Thanksgiving, too, Laura ... and anyone else who reads this between now and then. smile1
Posted By: LMA Re: FDK: The Masked Avenger (25/46) - 11/25/15 09:23 PM
Sounds really GREAT! Will be so excited to read more smile...

Laura
Posted By: HiddenMoon Re: FDK: The Masked Avenger (25/46) - 11/27/15 09:21 PM
Do you remember when you were little, and your mother gave you candies, saying: "Make them last. Don't eat all of them at once!"? I don't know about you, but I never followed the advice (the thing often resulting in a big stomach ache) :P. Well, apparently I haven't grown up that much, because when you posted a few chapters days ago, my first thought was: "I'm going to make them last until Chris is back", but after half an hour I had already read them all smile
Hope you had a Great Thanksgiving with your family!
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: The Masked Avenger (25/46) - 11/28/15 04:13 AM
I am of the same mind as HiddenMoon! Read everything up to this point and I love it!

It is a good thing Lavinia wanted to look in on Clark. With her deep knowledge of herbs and primitive medicine, she is in the right place at the right time. Now let's just hope Uncle Lucius does show up in the next day or two. Cedric is going to need at least a week to recuperate.

So ....when is the next post? clap
Posted By: ChrisM Re: FDK: The Masked Avenger (25/46) - 12/02/15 06:50 PM
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...after half an hour I had already read them all
LOL! What lovely feedback to find upon my return! Thank you! I've had mixed results with that advice myself over the years. Some treats just seem to disappear as if by magic, don't they? ;-)

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Hope you had a Great Thanksgiving with your family!
It was wonderful. Hope yours was, too. Rather chaotic at times, but so nice to have all the children at home for once. Grandbaby was baptized on Saturday, so another cause for celebration. :-)

Thanks again for the comments!
Posted By: ChrisM Re: FDK: The Masked Avenger (25/46) - 12/02/15 06:57 PM
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Read everything up to this point and I love it!
Thank you! :-)
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With her deep knowledge of herbs and primitive medicine, she is in the right place at the right time.
Definitely!
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So ....when is the next post?
In just a few minutes! :-)
As soon as the last guest left on Sunday afternoon, I cranked up the washing machine and the computer--not necessarily in that order! <g> I'll post more than one part today to help make up for being away for so long. And then I think I'll be able to go back to a more regular schedule. :-)
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