Heehee! Poor Clark.
He really suffered there, didn't he?
It clearly shows what we've all known for a while. Clark isn't very good at thinking on his feet. And for someone who swears she's going to keep his secret, she's doing a quite good job of revealing it to everyone else in the newsroom.
I agree. Clark definitely is not good at thinking on his feet. Some of the excuses he's given to cover up his secret show that much. As for Lois? She definitely didn't have the best strategy in terms of keeping Clark's secret a secret.
Cute story! :-) I was having fun picturing Clark in a dashing pirate costume.
I'm glad you enjoyed the visual of Clark as a pirate.
Fun stuff! Clark in a pirate costume? *swoon!*
I agree with Virginia. Clark can't think on his feet to save his life.
Another fan of Clark as a pirate? I'm glad you enjoyed his choice of costume.
Very creative!
. I loved how you had him in two different costumes--one a costume and one very much not. Did not see the end coming (til Lois started to 'search' for Superman).
Very worth the wait--glad you wrote a sequel
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Laura
A surprise ending is usually a great thing. I'm glad that I was able to provide one for you. I'm also happy to find out you thought it was worth the wait.
