Brava! While I'm content with the story as it stands, I would certainly not object to finding out the rest of the story (as Paul Harvey used to say). Lois is apparently doing some undercover investigating, but how would her safety hinge upon whether she had a boyfriend at the airport? What cover story did she tell the organization she infiltrated? Your story is leaving me with lots of questions -- but not in a bad way.
I'm glad to see you posting some new stories.
Joy,
Lynn
