Thank you! Glad to hear that the "style and wordplay" are working well!
Cannot wait for Lavinia and Cedric to have a reasonable amount of time to talk ... and then I'm sure that she will notice ... things.
It won't be much longer now. :-) Just as in MMIKC, the early part of the story has to establish the characters and the scene, but once that's done, and things get going ... whoa! ;-)
