Wow! I like the emotion that comes across on the page. I can feel Clark's heart stopping with him. I love the parallels with his disguise and Lois's.

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I didn’t see Lois in the guise of the young man that accosted us in the street, even though Jimmy had described her successful disguise when she uncovered that car theft ring just before I joined the Planet.
This is probably because she hasn't dressed up as a man again since Clark joined the Planet.

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Lois is keenly observant, adept at putting disparate pieces together to figure out what has been hidden, and incredibly tenacious. They’re all qualities I admire, and they’re what make her such a superb investigative reporter.

They’re also dangerous- at least to me.
The dangerous qualities of Lois that also attract him. wink

Well done! I must admit that I haven't seen this episode in a while. I enjoy the humor man vs. woman theme running throughout.


VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.