As much as I hate for Lois to leave Clark, I understand her motivation. You use the flashback technique so well, letting us know more about Lois and what lead her to write the article in the first place.
With Lois resigned to her decision, I could almost see you ending the story on this note. But it looks like you have something better for us!
I'm sure we'll be learning about the rooftop encounter in the next chatpers.
Can I tell you when I read that Superman and Clark Kent were at the press conference, my first thought was Alt-Superman? I'm excited to see where you'll take this.
Joan
