I enjoyed your story! I've always thought the show should have had more discussion between Lois and Clark when she finally figured out Clark was Superman. The show only seemed to focus on just how mad she was at Clark. I liked your insight into Lois' thoughts. Thank you for a good read!
Thank you! I've also thought that the initial discussion got cut too short (Clark running off to a rescue). It's believable because the world doesn't stop just because Superman got outted. And, of course the show wanted to surprise us with Lois blurting out the truth, but it would have been fun to see her talking to herself, pacing her apartment, putting everything together.