I'm enjoying seeing where this story is going. It's delightful to see how you incorporate dialogue from the series into other characters to fit your story.

And it's nice to see Lois and Clark more aware of Luthor's plots. Will be interesting to see what you do with their knowledge of him having kryptonite.

Luthor kissing Lois on the cheek didn't bother me. I am wondering how fast Luthor is going to try to force the ceremony. And whether Martha and Jonathan will have any public reaction.

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Cuidadora

"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor

"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly