Laura, your feedback made my day. Thank you.
The wording, really, you captured the 'sound' of the song, but the 'essence' that is the show.
I'm delighted that you wrote this, since that was precisely what I was aiming for. My goal had been to change the lyrics as little as possible while L&C-ifying them.
must remedy this and get my current story finally finished
Anything we can do to bribe your muse? If your muse is anything like mine, nagging won't work -- as you can see from my quirky story
With Apologies to Female Hawk. Unfortunately, bribery doesn't work on my muse, either...
Joy,
Lynn
