Great part, Corrina
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I've been so excited to read this story--what a treat to see more posted this morning.
I really enjoyed the feel of their evening together in the warehouse. Finding out all Clark has sacrificed for Lois, all he has planned. How he's--
for two years --been right there through it all. Risking himself for her.
I'm so glad Lois is noticing, seeing all Clark has and will do to protect her. She's aware of everything. She has so much knowledge of the strength of Clark's love for her. The reality check she is getting here is amazing--so full circle. Done in such a way that is really pulling at the heart.
You've done a really great job of having Clark walk that 'line'...loving her, but keeping the distance he thinks he needs. He's written very well
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The last moments together--hearing the rat(s)--brought that little bit of relief to the stress of the situation, brought down the walls just a bit. So glad you ended with them feeling a little like 'them'.
Loving it, Corrina
Laura
