Great exercise--and such awesomely different outcomes hyper.


#2 definitely got my attention. Oh-my-goodness! clap. Can you imagine? ...


Lois would not only find out about Clark's secret, but also pretty much all about his heritage. And if that wouldn't be shock enough jawdrop, you also at the same time throw at Lois that she is 'a woman that you (Clark) care for', use the words that he has 'found a life-mate' (in Lois), and lastly, state that she (Lois) is 'the woman you (Clark) love'. And this is all in one paragraph notworthy --and spoken to Lois early enough in the first season when she is in denial of her feelings for Clark (and he hasn't spoken to her on the bench in the park about how he feels). Wow smile.

I would absolutely have loved to read what would happen next shock.

Great job--very much enjoyed it!
Laura

Last edited by LMA; 04/15/15 01:08 PM.

"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~