Originally Posted by Lynn S. M.
Poor Clark. Poor confused Clark. I understand why Lois is delaying, but she really is sending some very mixed messages and is, I think, doing them both a disservice.

Then again, if she had told him everything, the story would be several parts shorter and your readers wouldn't have as much of a ride to enjoy along the way.

I'll second that 100%. I have to say that I disapprove the way Lois behaves in this chapter, especially since KK has made clear that she's aware of Clark's discomfort when she talks about her mysterious love interest... Why don't just drop the subject?
Originally Posted by Lynn S. M.
I don't suppose you'd give us an Easter present of dropping an extra part today? No? I didn't think so, but it was worth asking.

Ha, nice try Lynn... Although I think we'll have to make do with the chocolate eggs wink
Happy Easter/Passover everyone!

Last edited by HiddenMoon; 04/05/15 06:38 PM.

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