Hi Morgana,

Thanks for the FDK!

Originally Posted by Morgana
Now we get down to brass tacks!

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"You want me to meet you for lunch? What would Lois say?"

"I don't know. You can ask her when you arrive."

"Oh, she'll be there?"

"Linda, she is my wife."

"Yeah, I wish we could change that." That last was muttered almost under her breath, but Clark's super-hearing picked it up. Then she said, aloud, "I'll meet you at twelve-thirty."

Once a man stealer, always a man stealer. I totally get why Lois is concerned with having Linda around her husband. Nonetheless the dialogue here sparkles!

Thank you! I did make changes to this section. I'm glad the changes were effective.

Originally Posted by Morgana
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They left the Press Club separately, but they all headed in the same direction. They all entered the Star building separately. Linda came in the normal way, through the doors in the lobby while Clark flew himself and Lois to the roof.

Flying is so useful while breaking and entering! clap

Lois knowing just who she is married to puts aside a lot of barriers that existed in the series.

Originally Posted by Morgana
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Before Lois could stop her, Linda pushed through the doors silently.

Thinking, <Clark is going to kill me.> Lois followed her through.

Yeah Lois, he is!

Maybe he'll go easy on her.

Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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