What a nice little vignette. When Lois asked Clark to get Superman for her, I immediately thought of this other scene right at the end of season one. I wondered how Clark was going to react. Poor guy, he must have been afraid that his real persona would once again be turned down in favor of the superhero. It was good to read that Lois had something else in mind. Perhaps it would be rather interesting to read this story written from Clark's POV. Perhaps this could be a sequel?

I liked that Superman told her the whole truth, just this once, knowing full well that he would Lois clue in on another truth.

Last but not least, you asked for a title. My suggestion would be: "The truth behind the omission".


It's never too dark to be cool. cool