Wow, powerfully written. Sad in the subject matter, but ultimately uplifting in a way as Elise recognizes how and where things went wrong, and that she isn't totally to blame - that she has to stop making excuses for Calvin. Well done!
Battle On, Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
