Hi Mike,

Thanks for the FDK!

Originally Posted by Mike M
I love Lois and Louie's relationship and I really like how you expanded it to include the marriage and Louie's daughter not knowing about it.

The next few chapters will be different from the episode. I mean how can Lois have the conversation with Perry about Clark holding out on her when he is not doing that at all. That is a shame because that was one of my favorite scenes in the episode. (Lois: He's lying to me. Perry: Don't you lie to him? Lois: Of course, all the time but this is different!) But you will come up with something, I have confidence.

Mike

Yeah, Louie didn't get much play in the series. We didn't even get his daughter's name. I thought it would be something nice to add.

Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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