Oh boy; I had just started reading part 15 and one of your first lines reminded me of something I *meant* to comment on in *this* section! So I came right over
I hope it's not too late!!!
Okay, he wasn’t giving up on finding a solution, but she wasn’t either. She was just... preparing for contingencies. Couldn’t he see that?
She didn’t say that, instead just shrugging and looking away.
His mouth compressed. “Here’s your rolodex.” Putting it down on the desk, he retreated to the wall, leaning against it, hands in his pockets, not looking at her.
I can't believe I forgot it, because it was my favorite image in the section, Clark leaning against the wall, her will too much for him to take. It brought tears to my eyes, but was such an important part of this ordeal - the acceptance that she could die. It's heartbreaking and I had to say something!!!
Okay, off to read part 15!!!
NICOLE~
