First I loved the story, the concept, and the writing. I kept waiting for Al to make an appearance! My only concern was that I kept getting confused as to which Lois and which Clark were with each other at any one time. I commented under my breath that she made the time jumps more confusing than some of Ken's best stuff (Matchmaker).
I, like Queenie, loved the idea of fixing some of the "most cringe worthy" moments in the series and getting Lois and Clark together earlier than canon. The practicality of moving the relationship along faster but not too fast in each of the jumps and then struggling to figure out how much that is in each jump was daunting. They finally figured out that when they got it right they jumped to the next situation/time frame just like Quantum Leap.
Cool story.
Mike
Last edited by Mike M; 12/19/14 02:52 PM. Reason: Spelling (my bad)
