Oh, wow. Very moving. I cringed at the first line, thinking "Oh, no, not the nightgown! Here we go." But you explained that so nicely later, so that we don't want to beat Lois so badly about the head. Just bad timing! And Clark.. I feel bad for Clark, but I agree with Lois at the end. This is entirely the wrong way to go about it. He's only going to draw Lois closer to him, and get her more emotionally involved. After all, who saves Superman?

I can't wait to see how you finish this!


"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited