Wow--great chapter, Bakasi! smile

I am really curious to see how you will wrap up part 11 of this wonderful story. As everyone has stated, there is so much going on, so much left to find out. And this is SO interesting of a take on the Pilot.

I will be checking often for that next installment down the road. I'm really enjoying this Lois, and it will be fun to see where she takes us wink.

Lana knows. That is BIG. It was a really wonderfully written flashback, and I enjoyed how you ended it, with Clark needing to fly away, and with Lana noticing. The comment Clark made about how he should have told her about the hearing was a nice touch, too. Great!

You have me fully enthralled--can't wait for the next part grovel clap

Laura

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"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~