I'm posting this a little earlier, since I won't be home tommorow.

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You really are going to end it with the next chapter ???

You really ARE . Either that or it is going to be one hell of a chapter. Or you are setting it up for an immediate sequel ...

If it truly ends next chapter I will actually be quite disappointed as I am really getting into this story .

Mike

Only one more chapter? Say it ain’t so!

There are an awful lot of plot threads still to be wrapped up; I hope you’re planning a sequel! I have a feeling this Clark will need Lois to help him become Superman, can that really happen in one chapter?

Please don’t leave us hanging too long! This is a great story.

Love it! This is such a totally fresh take on the pilot.

Still there was no mention of Claude. Although he was only mentioned once, that episode really shaped Lois' life.

Anyhow, please give us a sequel!

Thank you so much for your kind feedback. Since the Pilot episode is almost over this story will end with the next chapter. But of course there will be a sequel showing Lois' POV. I won't be able to post it directly following this story, I'm afraid. I know that's kind of frustrating for a reader. But I'm not sure I would have gotten this far along in the story if it wasn't for your encouragement and the pressure posting creates.

So thank you very much for reading this story.

Wow--great chapter, Bakasi!

I am really curious to see how you will wrap up part 11 of this wonderful story. As everyone has stated, there is so much going on, so much left to find out. And this is SO interesting of a take on the Pilot.

I will be checking often for that next installment down the road. I'm really enjoying this Lois, and it will be fun to see where she takes us .

Lana knows. That is BIG. It was a really wonderfully written flashback, and I enjoyed how you ended it, with Clark needing to fly away, and with Lana noticing. The comment Clark made about how he should have told her about the hearing was a nice touch, too. Great!

You have me fully enthralled--can't wait for the next part

Laura

Just why, oh why, are the first two days of work after a vacation always this crazy?

Thank you very much for your feedback, Laura. This means a lot to me.

I, too, am very curious what you're going to say about the next part.